How does this sound for an ad?

Please help me edit my classified ad … seriously I am wanting to run this ad in the paper so I can get more work.

In your home elder care provider for the Laramie area. Available for brief check ins or extended care. Very reasonable rates. CNA experience and excellent references will be provided. 555-5555.

Does this make me sound like a prostitute whoring myself out or do I sound legit?

Please tell me I am needing to get more old people to take care of .. this sitting on the couch thinking about shit is going to drive me to drink; oh wait I do that already!

Notes

  1. melbajane said: Hey that’s not your phone number! WTF! :) It sounds good! Run it and get a job!!
  2. iamagabbymom said: I think it sounds good…
  3. sweetheatherbee said: legit, that shit is legit
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